Deep within
Lies an abyss of darkness
That renders my soul worthless
It eats me up bit by bit
Aggravating my frustration and depression
Daily, it haunts
Causing stream of tears to spring up
Why am I not best at it?
Why can’t I be like them?
Nothing I’m I but a failure
My heart bleed
When they are seen as better
When grades define our intellect
When the outside physique is counted
And a family name paves way
My soul weeps
When class defines us
And no one knows me
Or I know anyone
I feel lonely, desolate, empty
When social status stands out
Why was I not born
With a silver spoon in the hand?
I’m broken
When they sing out loud their praises
When they hear my story without laughter
When they see me without a grin
When they’re glad
Seeing me all hang-up and isolated
And no shoulder to comfort
My body shivers
When love is for “normal blokes”
And not nerds like me
Need I blame anyone for my misfortune?
For thoughts of pains and sorrows
Fill my heart
It’s not jealousy but alas feeling of lowliness
Yet I repose in my Pilot
Knowing He made me part of an intricate plan
I’ll rise, Yes I’ll rise
Fantastic work by all standards and qualifications.
Keep it up dearest.
Thank you ❤️
You’re absolutely doing the most. It’s humbling knowing you in this & many fields with excellent works.
Best regards!!!
I’m humbled. Thank you ????
You nailed it… Great one
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Good work
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Great job dear.
Kofi Awoonor junior !!!
Soar higher Mon Amie
I’m humbled. Thank you very much ❤️
Touchy????????
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Such a great piece Ma’am. God bless you. It is not easy to feel isolated.
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Great… This poem will one day be taught in school.
A very beautiful piece????❤️
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Very inspiring ????❤️
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Very nice and inspiring poem
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Yes, we’ll arise. Damn!, you piece is very nice. Caused a shift within my emotions as I read through slowly.
Keep it straight and piercing. You indeed gonna arise. Ain’t kidding.
Thank you very much ????. I’m glad you touched by my piece.
So inspiring.
Keep it up
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Nice write up. Keep it up.
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Good work done Emi.
Keep it up
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Great! In all I give you thumbs up ????
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In fact am highly impressed with the poem. Can’t wait to read the next one God bless you dear. Thank you.
I’m glad you liked it. Thank you ❤️
Indeed (Deep Within) what a interesting poem, this poem make my day so enjoyable and motivate I wish I can have access to a poem like this everyday . God bless the writer for writing such a great poem thank you.
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The successes of others doesn’t make you a failure.
Keep at it. Don’t give up. It is just a matter of time.
Thank you, Ethel
This is a great piece
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Yes i will rise. A good poem for my soul
I’m glad you are motivated❤️
Nice write up, so touching
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This is amazing.
I enjoyed this poem.
” Knowing he made me part of an intricate plan”
I’m glad you enjoyed it❤️
God bless you for all your motivational quotes
Keep it up
May God sees you through your Pains of writing and brings you to his Brook of rest
Amen. Thank you. May we all be great ????
Good job, keep it up
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This poem made me feel emotional
My favorite stanza is stanza two because it makes me feel like i will not be useful to my family, i always strive to triumph and achieve success but to no avail.
Glad you liked it. The last stanza should be your motivation. Repose in your Maker. You are part of an intricate. Above all be self-motivated and tell yourself you can make it. No situation is permanent. Definitely you will rise.
Heartfelt
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Thank you
The poem is so powerful to the extent that, I couldn’t sleep last night.
Keep it up.
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Nice and lovely
Very much appreciative ????
Thank you ❤️